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The Overflowing Bra

Happyguy
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The Really Big War, The
This is one of my favorites, just because it's so unrelentingly nutty. I also think it has some of the best expansion sequences in it that I've written. Plus I like the moral message that it sends. I don't have a reliable time stamp on this, but it must have been written in 1999 or 2000.
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bear chives
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

lots of fun! very creative story. lots and lots of BE, which was great.

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