My first foray into erotic fiction. I hope y'all enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.78
- BE: 4.44
- Characters: 4.11
- Technical: 4.33
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is my new favorite subgenre femdom with enlargement of boobs, ass, dick, balls leading to unnatural ejaculation. Straight and to the point.
GK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fantastic story. Straight to the point, no messing around, and all the stuff I like to see. Outstanding.
Calebb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Awesome ideas, more extreme than other writers and definately different. Keep it up!
konser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
i like the growing balls and the nipple fuck. A part 2 soon?
lostboy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A good story, aside from a few minor grammatical errors. I especially liked the nipple-fuck part! I'd love to see a sequel; keep working at it!
SMAP
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nicely written, good flow (ahaha!) and no grammatical errors that stuck out. The action was well-described and while I could have done with a bit more build-up and overall longer story, it was still very well done overall.
Gojira
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I really liked the balls expansion on the poor fellow, and the sexual torture was very fun to imagine!
Fox
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Very nice. I loved the set up, the style, and the growth. Some minor tech issues but nothing that detracted from the story at all. I really hope to see this continued. Maybe some more description about the BE and PE.
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