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The Overflowing Bra

HubbleOverTaiwan
Were-Breeder: Origins
Scarlet and Maria are two friends who are forever changed by the were-breeder curse. These two ladies are the first victims, though they seem to be enjoying it just fine. Read on for more transformative action!
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Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Loved it! Makes you want to go back and read the whole series.

matt
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoy your writing. I've noticed you like to go all out after a few chapters, like in your other series, which I like, however, it makes it easy for the reader to get confused with what is happening on the first read.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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