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Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.75
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 4.25
Mopey
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Decent for a short story. Good lack of obvious and distracting typos.
This has potential to be expanded, to set up the checkov's gun of programming mistakes earlier and more explicitly.
However, please save your file as .RTF or .HTML or just use the built-in PDF converter in Office 2007. Not everyone can read docx files, and so, in consideration of others, please use a more interchangeable, non-proprietary format.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good job. Keep it up. How about a follow up, perhaps someone arriving at work. Or maybe a janitor to give her more then the coin.
The story has been done b4 but you did an admirable job. I only wish it hadn't ended so quickly. Perhaps a happy ending twist to the story? She could wind up w/ DDD's and BE happy! W/ her janitor BF.
Wild Card
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Liked the story, items that grant wishes or curse and alike are those I love most. Not properly formating the wish and a wish turning out some what wrong or bad I like.
The transformation went very fast, even tho I could follow what was happening and all a bit more "time warping" and slow the process down as you add a bit more details during the growth would have been nice. Overall a great story.
Boobarian
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This is the kind of BE story I enjoy. The BE is the reason for the story, not a side affect of the plot. Can't wait for the other coins to get a writeup.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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