Aurelia has spent her whole young life keeping her supernatural heritage in check. An off-hand comment by her best friend and an errant daydream, however, results in bra-busting shenanigans.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.57
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 4.57
- Technical: 4.71
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this, really sexy, and dare I say begging for a slightly longer sequel, I would love to find out how they manage to cope with their new endowments, what Aurelia's parents think and perhaps how it all happened - do they find a way to reverse the effects, so that they can change at will or is it a permanent change? I'm excited to think of the poteential for this story. Good going!
Sexyjin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought it was awesome and super sexyy. My only issue was that I felt like you didn't describe the breast size very often, so I was confused as too how big she was getting every now and then.
I would love to see more of this if not more stories like this.
Dork
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic. We need more short and sweet stories like this.
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Simple, simple, simple! It's refreshing to read a great scene: we don't have to sift through pages of backstory looking for those key words...
Wonderful!
voodoo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Kowalski
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It's a really well-written scene. Like the final scene of a film we just missed (full of vampires, werewolves, aliens, cheerleaders). And this is the Happily Ever After ending. I look forward to the sequel.
wildcard
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Easy read, liked it a lot.
If there where grammar problems I didn't notice them during the smooth read of the story.
Good deal of BE through out the story.
Keep the comming
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