The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Cristina Prince
cristinaprince@live.com
School Girls
More fun in Cherub Cove -- this time, we're taking our budding bimbos to class!
Average Scores:

razaksroughnecks
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another well crafted piece of fiction. Keep 'em coming!

daichi
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Nice story, but all the fluff details explaining how, where, what when and why it all happened were missing, sentence structure wasn't bad but to my dismay were a LOT of grammar mistakes...

G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Yummy, Ms. Prince....simply yummy. My head is mix of horny, puffy, sleepy, dreamy...this story hit the spot.

Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Fantastic! One of the best stories I've read in a very long time! And I mean it this time! Can't wait for more!

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