Prevert-One rewrites the classic Mowermandave story Get Closer. Two women get taught a lesson by a gilted wizard.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.17
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
acequia
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I Loved it
totally
liddleamanda@live.com
lets RP sometime
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A good solid effort. Had moments of heat. I agree that the revenge is a little skewed. All in all, a very good outing as a writer. Thanks for sharing.
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not the most amazing story ever written, but there's just something about it... I loved it!
fahzbehn
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nicely done, good twist at the end.
OmniTrixie
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
A disproportionate revenge story is rewritten into -- a disproportionate revenge story.
robbi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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