An advertisment for Master PC
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.88
- BE: 1.75
- Characters: 1.75
- Technical: 1.88
Above Ground Swimming Pools
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It's straight to the point! You could not tell in other words! :D
Cobra
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well done please make more :)
G-man001
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Perhaps one of the yahoo groups, BimboTransformation or GirlTF groups or BimboSlut Captions, is the place to put this...not at a story site. Sorry.
Kanodin
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Wrong medium. The file contains five pictures with short captions loosely linking to the Master PC idea. "Advertisement" belongs at a user upload gallery, not here as story.
Greener21
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
One lame joke stolen from a TV commercial. No writing, no BE. It's good that you tried but please do something different next time.
anonymoose
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
CrashO
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Advertisement would be great if you weren't advertising with Photoshop and Google Image search on OFB for a story on OFB.
I can't give this a 0 and I want to.
anonymouse
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Limited writing. Nice little joke, but not much more than that.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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