The Overflowing Bra

A very difficult read.  
Please take some time with your spelling and punctuation!  Simply passing a spell-checker doesn't cut it.
Familiar plot and very little development.

Seems all too familiar to another story on the site.

Like someone read the latest book of Peripheral Cocksucker and just had to do something about the Kat/Kitten thing. 
Pace yourself, focus on narrative, make sure she's characterized well. 

How did the plastic surgeon become such a bimbo & exactly what was done to cause the breasts to constantly rxpand? There is no real flow to the story & no background story to explain how the surgeon got to be such a bimbo.

Rushed out like a late research paper. Did you think there was a deadline for submitting this piece?

ug, waste of time reading. 

While I appreciate the contributions of all to our underrepresented literary genre, this piece lacks description of BE, characters that make any sense, sufficient proofreading, and overall evidence of effort.  Another hint is that if you're going to be writing something less than two pages, don't give it an extensive timespan.

Like, when are authors going to give up bimboization for the story theme?  Big Bore, Texas was a Big Bore, too.  

Be very careful with unreliable narrators, the story can devolve really fast. Also the BE is very well developed, especially for a journal entry story..:ow do they feel? Why are they bigger? Let her ask these questions at least.

Seems more like an outline for a story than anything.

..not much to it really no description of the be/growth and the story was rushed

There's no 'there' there.

Another rush-job of a bimboization story, told from the first-person in journal form. Sub-standard grammar, and all the cliches of the traditional bimbo story to boot.
One of the problems with trying to have a victim of bimboization tell the story is that they get worse and worse at telling it as it goes on. And when they're not good at telling it at the start, all you get is a muddle.