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The Overflowing Bra

Anonymous
TheClause2007@yahoo.com
Spiders, Part 2
Part 2 of Spiders. Scientists attempt to breed a species of tiny alien spiders in Cona's breasts. Stay tuned for Part 3.
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Maura
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

carol haney - I'm with you one the ladybug vs. sdeipr thing! It's a nice surprise in February when one comes crawling out from somewhere. Makes you realize how much you miss spring by that point.

bartman2589
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Looking forward to part 3, don't make us wait too long please, it sounds like it's going to really get interesting soon.

Very Free
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Disturbing.

OmniTrixie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Well-written, but disturbing. I think the third part is going to contain the first deaths.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I've no idea whom are you as an artist, but this story interests me. What will happen to her, will you continue, & why are the spiders changing? Please write more eventually, I'd love to see the story continue.

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