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Guy gets it on with his huge-breasted sister-in-law. Yet another great work from Steve Palmer.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.63
- BE: 2.38
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 4.13
Stavi
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
wonderful story though there was no expansion her breast were already very large and the adultry gives the story some drama to it instead of it just being a story completely about sex. i would have to say this is one of the better short stories I've read.
Clownboat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Hey now, lets not be moral crusaders here, there are far worse themes than adultery on this site. Plus, I don't think Steve Palmer himself uploaded these stories, they were originally in the bearchive in the members section and they weren't self proclaimed "great stories" there. Anyway, its a really well written story, I just wish the characters weren't in-laws. At least its not furries or anything.
Manipulativevoter
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Two can play it this way.
The Doob
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Yet another self-declared not-at-all-masterpiece from the pretentious ego that is Steve Palmer. No BE (which means that despite being well written from a technical standpoint, it doesn't belong on this site). Completely dislikeable characters and premise. Fail.
Pete
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
It was certainly a well-written story. I enjoyed it mostly, which is surprising because the center of the plot was cheating on spouses - something I wholeheartedly dislike in the real world. I guess that alone has to say something about the writing quality.
There may have been large breasts involved, but no growth of any sort. This *is* a breast expansion site, so I'd have hoped for, well...yeah.
Pidget
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The story was pretty good, only a few technical errors. The characters weren't particularly likeable, as they're deliberately and frequently cheating on their spouses, and there was no breast expansion at all. I'm all for stories revolving around large breasts, but being as the rating is for breast expansion I had to give you a 1.
StPalmfan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just love your stories. Keep posting and i keep rating 5555
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's hard to believe there were that many downloads and no one bothered to rate this. Good story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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