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The Overflowing Bra

the rabbits
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Eleven
A man meets his older sister again after a number of years, and sees she's grown quite large! Sex ensues, of course.
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Noctus Angelus
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

It's very enjoyable and I look forward to reading more of the adventure. The only thing is that there really isn't any expanding happening in the story, you just get to hear about it after the fact. Other then that Eleven and Eleven More are great. I can't wait for the third one and hope there will be one.

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