Chapter 4 in the ongoing adventures of Matt. Amber, Bree, Candice and Danielle are all keeping Matt busy. He needs a break, and did he just see someone in the house?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.33
Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good stuff! Descriptions could do with a little more work and you need to check your writing, seeing quite a few typos/ grammar mistakes. All that aside though I can't wait to read more. Keep at it!
KageShukuun
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great.. just plain great.. i cant wait for more storys :)
Knar
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I really like the variety I'm seeing, the only thing that might be improved is description.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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