The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Seraglio
Body-Shifter's Universe: the Hitchhiker
"I had to strain myself with a sleepless night of marathon sex to reassure all of my willing alien sex slaves that I did not mean to play favorites."
    What began with a lonely hitch-hiker soon grew into a non-stop orgy of nymphomaniac supermodels addicted to my sperm. They give blow-jobs, kinky sex, and breast-expansion theatre on demand... and I intend to show them off to the world...and my Ex-wife!
Average Scores:

Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hot!!  Very similar to Xxecil.
Rod
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My top favorite story!

HorseRadish
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A very good effort.

Doc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was great!

BEman
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Hmmm. I liked this one quite a bit. Nice ending.

Nickname
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I see the Ex got in the last word.
(Urrrrgh! is not a word.)
Will future stories involve shotguns?
That's how you deal with alien mutant replicants!

TD
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very nice. Even better than original.

MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Not much BE. But overall I love the concept of these stories and I'm glad you ran with it.

You should use something besides "Cereal Bowl" sized breasts. It makes me think of something very hard and unappetizing.

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