The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

g-man
gazamali@hotmail.com
Limitless Sex
First story, please comment! 

Lisa, your regular 17 year old comes across a strange rock that embeds itself into her body and takes her kinky mind and body through a whole host of orgasmic transformations as she pleasures herself over and over again.
Average Scores:

Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Hot.
curious caller
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Yup thats what I would do! looking forward to reading the second one

Stosh
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

More please!

goober
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I crave your creativity! so when is the next one due?

Sum Yung Gai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Just the kind of freaky I like. I'd love to see what more adventures Lisa can have with her self-modification skills.

Jooe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Great story, would love to read more.

Benji Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Needs quote marks around dialogue but an excellent story regardless! For the love of god please do write more! It's not often I give out a 5, hell it's not often I give out anything above a 3, you're good. Keep it going!

Aaack
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent story, unpredictable too, it was a wild ride.
I sincerely hope for G-Man to write the second (and third, forth, etc) part of the story.

VLAD
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Can't wait for next.

Eiffel
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Can't wait for the rest of it!

TD
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Very nice :)

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