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The Overflowing Bra

Oblimo
It's Always Time, Act Six: Second Helpings
The story's conclusion, featuring final confrontations, plot twists, blow job contests, goo girl orgies, a unique recipe for key lime pie, bishi-futa reaming, Arthurian myth, naga sex, naughty tentacles, rampaging skank-bots, breasts that blot out the sun, and the true meaning of love.
Average Scores:

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Please keep writing more stories like this amazing series

Chrono
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The sheer depth of character and story kept me coming back for more. The erotica served as a delectable spice on top of an already satisfying meal for a reader. Quite simply, this is the best piece of erotic writing I've had the pleasure of reading, and I'm afraid Oblimo may have raised the bar far too high for others to compete.

Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

*gasp*.....speechless. Brilliant work my friend.

Myself
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Ah.... another installment of "It's Always Time".

The finale?! Nooooooooo!!!!

This saga was... epic. A rarity that managed to have porn, plot, modern and myth. Consistently high-standard - if you don't write professionally, you should. If you do write professionally, and you bring this much passion and power and quality to it, I want to read it, even if it's technical documentation.

HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fan-effing-tastic. Very well done. Deserves to be published.

Rex
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My goodness, absolutely phenomenal work Oblimo. I have to echo the others here and say that I'm sad it's over, but damn was that an awesome ride.

Poor Bee, heh.

DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I genuinely miss seeing updates for It's Always Time, especially after a long day at work since this was some of the most fantastic writing I've read. Both online and in paper. I'm really hoping that even if Oblimo doesn't come up with a sequel, he can find the creative energies to write another series of this magnitude.

fourshot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm honestly sorry its over! I do hope that Oblimo has the energy for a sequel. I waited and waited for each installment, because the story was that good! The characters are great. Dude take a break then roll out a new series. I, for one, am waiting patiently.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Saying this series was good is an understatement, saying it was great doesn't quite get the point across. I've never been in meliae girls before now, but you turned my eyes around. The character development, the plot, & the writing in general, was not only exceptional, but more than enjoyable. You felt every character's personality by the end of the story, although it jumped around quite a bit, it felt like watching a television show on paper. I was amazed, scared, & just a tad sad it's over. I hope to see more stories like this, although I am not overly hopeful. Have a great day & thank you.

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