The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Miracle Grow VI
The final episode of this series with a link to the next.  Please leave comments or E-mail.....tell me where you think the story should go.
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mistuh s.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

it was... ok. i really liked the other onew a hell alot more. to tell the truth it was just a little bit boring.

Wolverine
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I loved this story because it was just so fucking far out there, and the author commentary throughout worked perfectly without being an annoying interruption every three sentences. Good work. Keep going.

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