The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

guhbone
Sonic Growth
Trevor's eccentric friend Jake claims to have coded a series of high frequency sound bites that encourages human growth hormones - and he proves it.

The two devise a clever plan to append the clip to the end of the anthem played in the mornings at their high school.  Things get a little out of hand...

Average Scores:

Pochi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
one of the best
savagecabbage
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Enjoyed it very much! Very funny, great idea and good character development. Although most stories tend to get rushed towards the end, I would love to see more from you.

Dave
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story was exactly what I was looking for. It's just about believable, and it's well written. The characters are well developed, the story's pace moves well, and I never once had to go back and re-read something, or stumble over anything.
I'd 6/5 for overall enjoyment, if I could.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Love the GT/GTS stuff.

Kam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

one of my very favorites here

Aimless
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice one. I am a sucker for happy endings.

tids
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Probably the best growth story I've ever read!

cetus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

One of the best stories on the site. Good ol' fashion BE!

Rick
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Loved it!

Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm not sure why I enjoyed this story so much but it's great fun... I think it's just shameless old school BE/growth etc.

DeepSpace
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story! Would love to see another story like this. Maybe even a sequel to this one.

Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

There were some spelling and grammar errors, but aside from that, it was a very good story. I would've liked to see Rick get his ass whupped - by the girls! And more of Jake, too. I also loved the great cup size and hanging down descriptions.

brit
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Loved the growth/giant/giantess stuff! This has the great feel of old BE. Much more on topic than most of the stuff you see today.

OM NOM NOM
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Typos were noticeable but not a major distraction. Overall a good story.

growbot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Great story!

Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Wow! This is great! There were some spelling and grammar errors, but aside from that, what a story! Just awesome!

avburns
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great story! Would love to read a spin-off/sequel involving more BE caused by the audio file.

gman1
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A few typos, but a really enjoyable idea and story. Don't get to caught up with the letter cup sizes. Comparisons to objects are a good mix in. I've never seen a P cup, so I don't know how big it is...anyways, keep writing!

Raynd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! I hope you are a prolific writer. Ignore Bimbolover's comments. 5/5

Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved it. I loved Janna's attitude to the growth most of all.

BimboLover
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Its a good start. A little editing and it could be really good. Id cut the whole part about Rick out, its kinda distracting, and I'd like to see some description about how the hormones are not only increasing the girls size but also about how its making them think more sexually, dress sluttier and basically just become abnormally hornier. Toss in some subplot about a teacher too, would be nice, maybe a replacement for Rick as to you getting suspended because you wouldnt fuck her enough or something

aryanman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

best story on here.

NinjaInTheNight
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The story was like wow....it was great, all I can say is I hope there is either a sequel or just another story of this caliber.

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