The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Gunther
Voodoo iPhone 4
Tim and Tina take steps to counter Megan's control over the magic phone.  Big steps.
Average Scores:

tunersunlimited
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of my favorite stories. Can wait for chapter 5

anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

can't wait for part 5

OM NOM NOM
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Excellent. Please keep writing.

Lothar
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Keep up the great work!

Ouroboros
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter.

gman1
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I agree with Owl, but gotta love a giantess story that has actually been continued. Thanks and keep it up!

0wl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

There's a lot more muscle growth than boobs growing, but otherwise it's a good story.

sexy man
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

nice stuff keep up the good work

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