A little swim at the local pool leads Kerry to something more including bigger boobs, the Forces of Evil, the Forces of Nerdity, a shower room full of cheerleaders, and much bigger boobs.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.63
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.88
- Technical: 5.00
Dranon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome work as always, though I would like to echo the request for a bit more fluid progression. Regardless, they're fun reads and very erotic. Keep it up!
Kerryfan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This series rocks. I agree that some of the scenes go by too quickly. She could be a little more evil too. Not gore, but humil.
Kanodin
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I am not really sure where this story is going, or if it is really meant to go anywhere. There are some "huh?" moments in the story where I got lost, but I just kept reading like my confusion didn't matter; the technique worked, so I am not sure if that is a good thing. I liked the story/episode.
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
"Her breasts nearly broke the sound barrier.." That's not breast expansion, that's breast explosion! Happens too quickly! Need more BE!
blah-blah-blah-blah-blah-blah, SEX! ruminate-ruminate-ruminate, BLAM!
Just when we're getting into it, the scene changes. A lotta fun to read though.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the few authors posted here whose material I look forward to seeing. Another fun read.
Ouroboros
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome stuff, can't wait for the next chapter!
Goat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Seriously dude, this is fast becoming my favorite series.
Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great one, Bill! Keep them coming.
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