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Twisted Transformer
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Tim The Enchanter: Chapter 8
The Tim The Enchanter saga continues with a new author taking the reigns (with the original author's approval). Tim uses his magical powers to sculpt and shape women to his will. Transformations include breast expansion and women with animal hybrid characteristics.
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Twisted Transformer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Thanks for the positive feedback, guys. Always appreciated. And yes J-Man, I am working on Chapter 9 right now (with some interesting twists and surprises, and more on Tim's past) and am leaning towards ending the Tim saga with Chapter 10-- unless I get some amazingly fresh ideas and am able to breathe some new life into Tim and his story... We'll see, though. Stay tuned, and thanks again for reading.

mistuh s.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

awesome awesome awesome. I can't wait for more. Please keep writing

J-Man
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Just finished reading this and wow!! I read the old chapters on another website (can't remember which one) about 2 years ago and now a sequel comes out of the blue.. Excellent character development and description-- I really noticed Tim's growth as a character in this one.. Having the story take place in real time since the last one was written (eg. 2 years) was neat. Hopefully it wont be another 2 years until chapter 9!!

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