landedphoenix@yahoo.com
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.69
- BE: 4.54
- Characters: 4.46
- Technical: 4.15
clib
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm loving this so far! Please continue.
gman1
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I agree. Having the girl harbor the inner desire to be huge is very awesome. If you keep us waiting, I'll hunt you down like a dog and......
wowser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I agree with the others, but I think that the author should be penalized for leaving us, coitus interruptus, in the middle of the most suspenseful part.
me
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great! I love how eager she is and look forward to the next part!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really great story that hits exactly on what makes the genre so exciting. Please continue!
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Terrific story, just great! Can't wait for next chapter.
w00tx100
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story, look forward to part 2.
Sir Boob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good god, man. You cut that story off at the most tantalizing moment possible. Well done, sir. I look forward to the next installment with a drooling mouth.
Breasts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Pretty good stuff. I look forward to hearing what happens next.
es3ban
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Marred only by a few typos that would have easily been caught with a single proofread, your story is excellent. I look forward to part 2!
Spartacus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good, very good, I look forward to reading more.
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great! I love when the girl loves it and wants more.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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