danwoodsversion1@aol.com
Q. Why shouldn't you pick on people in school?
A. Because you never know what they're going to do when they're older.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.78
- BE: 4.44
- Characters: 4.44
- Technical: 4.33
Zion-Star
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome! I love it! More please!
oscine
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Die in hell, you perverted bastard! Just kidding, I liked it a lot :)
B E Lover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Story was ok, but I found the end confusing. Why torture someone if it gives them pleasure? As far as pumping up a breast with fluid, I've never heard of it being done like that and I don't think it's possible to make them that big (but this is a fantasy, I know). The author made numerous spelling and grammar errors, and is completely clueless about where an apostrophe belongs. Needs to proofread his story for errors.
Pobblebonk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very similar to 'Promises, Promises' but that's ok. One of my favourites actually.
Ghoomba
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Pretty well done. Thanks for taking the time to write something worth reading.
J
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fanastic plot line (though a little similar to story I've seen elsewhere). Great length too, can't wait to see what Nicola has planned for the others!
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Though I'm not into TG, the plot was excellent. The vendetta that the main charecter had really made this story become alive, There were a number of spelling errors but then again, who's not guilty of that?
Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That wasnt badly written at all! I really felt Nicola's anger and sara's emotions.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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