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I have been reading here at Overflowing Bra for a while and I have been irritated that each story comes close, so i figured i would type this and see how it does. If you all like it i will make a few sequals. This takes place in some random suburb and is about Jessica and Tiffany, two competing gardeners who get a surprize when something grows that they aren't expecting. more breast growth to come for certain. tell me what you guys think.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.13
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.25
Wolverine
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I like the potential for this story.
xarinth
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I have enjoyed all of these so far, and can't wait to see what you do with this next.
Blamandude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I like it, its a good start!
Ben
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I only wish you had done the whole story before tantalizing us with this one!
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It's different from other B.E. stories I've read. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Dog
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Hey, I hope these positive reviews encourage you to continue. I'm liking the tongue-in-cheek style writing in this piece. I agree with Charfield. I've always enjoyed lac. I also enjoy some weirder stuff too. But this is your story, take it where you like to go. Keep writing!
puzzler
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Charfield
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the story very very much, it is neatly written and has several good BE aspects in them. The only thing I personally would like to see is some lactation... but hey that me.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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