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Rachel/Elle returns in Sexified - Part IV (file includes parts I-III as well).
After shutting down the SEX project and gaining a new sex slave in Dr. Holly, Rachel comes to understand just how powerful her sexual force made her. Added epilogue to part III.
This chapter is meant to expand on said epilogue.
Be sure to rate and comment this!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.25
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 3.25
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Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Sent the first post, but it wasn`t published. I am writing the second. It's me, the African tourist.
liko
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved everything, except the main character's tendency for violence. The descriptions of transformation are fantastic. I'll try to write something based on Elle if I get the time.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Too many tense shifts and not enough story
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent. Can't wait for more.
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