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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Rumour Mill: Vice Versa: Tuesday Evening

Mike takes his new girlfriend, Lindsay, home for dinner to meet the family, but it seems that Callie has a friend over: the ever-lovely—and getting lovelier—Katelyn.

It looks like dessert will consist of Stripper Extraordinaire. Yummy!

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than
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome

anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

excellent work- reading them a couple of times each

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