The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Rumour Mill: Vice Versa: Monday Evening

Mike has his laptop and a copy of Master PC, and he’s all healed up, so it’s time for revenge! His tormentors shall suffer for all of the indignit— Oooh. Check out the cute nurse!

Maybe revenge can wait.

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Mopey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I am so very pleased that Mr. Pratt is expanding on his previous, excellent work.
I admit, I am a bit of a fanboy of his work, but, I think his work deserves it.

Chase
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'd like more details, but this is good stuff...hope you post more soon!

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