Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 3.00
HeliumGirl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I am personally hoping for the Voodoo Balloons curse, but then that's me: I love the boobs-as-floating-balloons type of BE. Keep up the good work.
Satudo
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Considering it was written in notepad and then simply read over by myself as a spell check I figured that it wasn't all that bad. :)
Still, I've borrowed a friends microsoft office disc and installed word 2k3. Hopefully it will pick up the errors that I miss. I can't think of a single friend I would share this kind of thing with, let alone have them proof read...
I'm thinking I'll finish up the other two chapters sometime tomarrow. I already have them half written but the problem is finishing the over all plot. I'm honestly not entirely sure whether I will be able to fit Amelia (Water sports) Deborah's little sister into this one.
Also I've got two different 5th curses fighting for a place and I'm not entirely sure which I will use.
Rebound at the Controls or Voodoo Balloons & Crazy Water
Heh... Regardless thanks for commenting eh?
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Highly enjoyable and creative story, I'm looking forward to see how this ends. But I do agree with the previous poster, there were some errors that wouldn't be picked up with a spellchecker that a proofreader were get.
Yummm
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
My only request for next time is to get it proof-read by someone else, but beyond that it was great, very well written.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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