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The Overflowing Bra

Oxriff
oxriff@ymail.com
Sexified part II
The sequel to Sexified, the story about a woman that gains the ability to transform into a sex goddess.

More transformations and discoveries await the sexed-up former secretary Rachel as she returns to Washington DC.
Rachel comes to understand what happened to her… and learns to like it!

File also includes Sexified part I.
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Randolph
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

The premise is great, but the story seemed a bit rushed.

ElleFan
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

You really need to continue this story.

AvidReader
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Too short! Please write more!

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