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The Overflowing Bra

aka: I Should Know Better
The Barista Pt. I
This series of stories are based on the serendipitous meanderings of a Westside Sales Manager and his tug-of-war tales of lust and denial for a new Barista at his favorite coffee haunt. The only catch is, is she open to his [would be]advances? Tag along for the twisted ride... as we find out more about both of their areas of weakness.
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Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Be? What BE? Like he said, a waste of time until the rest of the story is there

ice0wl
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

A story fragment with not even a hint of BE. I don't buy it.

The Handler
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

So far it is a good read, it baits you.

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