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The Overflowing Bra

Hell-Scythe
Power 4 b
Discover the fate of James and the truth of how he gain his powers.
Average Scores:
 Mechfan9
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I realy like the story and can't wait for the next chapter.
 buddyu
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I hope to see more
 TD
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
A damn good story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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