An Exploration of the Complexities of Modern Feminism--With Growing Tits!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
some guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A wonderful and quite original effort.
Great descriptions, although the difference between a D cup and a G cup is so substantial that the protagonist ought to have noticed it as a major change in her girlfriend, rather than "they looked even more enormous than usual." I found the character motivations and personality a little shallow, even given the ironic premise. Good irony requires well-developed characters. Take the pun as you will.
gman1
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Superb job, keep writing.
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice indeed. Though very little of it seemed to have anything to do with feminism.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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