The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Dr. Boobology
Cara's Self-Control
Dr. Boobology's first attempt at a graphical BE scene. Cara figures out how to grow in all the right ways.
Average Scores:

Figment
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

If nothing else it was cute and a really good first attempt. Abit short though.

Pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Nice pics! Keep up the good work.

I look forward to more.

Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Interesting. It almost seems as though the artwork gets better towards the end- and not just because her breasts are growing. The storyline's left a bit wanting, though. I'd have liked to know more about how she was able to will her old figure away- is she some sort of kundala?

Anyhow, very nice first effort.

nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Very nice vignette, good use of tables to present both story and graphics.

Silvanis
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Loved it! Hope to see more art (and stories!) from you soon.

Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A little too short and perplexing, but it gets points for the awesome drawings.

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