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The Overflowing Bra

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The Tauros Chronicles - Chapter 5
The ritual of the First Transformation is complete and a new werecow is born.  But a strange twist reveals inexplicable secrets to the newly changed.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Top 100 best story on this site.  Must read.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
The thing that sets this story apart is that past the supernatural aspects the chacters have a very well described human quality about them. 
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