The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

JB/NL
tsunami@xs4all.nl
Creed of Lust
Set in the same universe as "Earth is such a stupid name" and "Breakin the Laws of Lust" this side story takes place near the beginning of the second story, involving chemicals, a little accident and some really, really, really BIG trouble.

FAIR WARNING: may contain some content objectionable to tender BE-fan souls.
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Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

It was junk the first time it was uploaded, it's still junk no matter how many times it's uploaded. But then, that makes it right at home on this site.

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