The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Second Childhood
In the near future a mysterious virus is loosed on the
United States, causing the population to undergo a
radical mutation that no one seems particularly
troubled by.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I definitely was not on board with some of the stranger and more depressing aspects of the second half of the story, but the character development and plot, not to mention scenario is out of the park as far as a BE story is concerned. Trying to bring this thing to an art form eh?

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As always, Kowalski delivers the goods in this amazing tale. The right balance of smut and plot, some spectacularly overblown sex scenes - as always, Kowalski goes to a very dark place in his ending, which may not be to everyone's taste, but it's a terrific story nonetheless. I highly recommend it.

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I really liked the story until about page 110. Then it started to suck, IMO.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A few minor typos prevent me from giving this a perfect score.

Great work, especially with the stuff going on in the background (like the Martha Stewart parody).

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Excellent story. Good premise with a great mix of characters. I especially enjoyed near the end Danielle and Keith treating mind blowing sex as just the norm. Something they had to do.

Well done.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Although much of this story is not my cup of tea, the author is phenomenally talented!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Excellent story, though it could be a bit hard to keep all the characters straight.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Excellent; engaging, well written and enjoyable. A little dark at the end.

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