Another chapter of Ann's worst nightmare. Comments appreciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.81
- BE: 4.31
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.00
Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
He wishes what? He wishes what?! gar!
Keep up the good writing. I would suggest using spellcheck, though.
Quadhouse
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
WisdomTooth
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Big fan of the story... just one thing that disturbs me is the whole age 15 thing... then she regresses 5 years more?... I mean I have 2 sisters one 15 and one 8. It kind of freaks me out when such a young age is brought up. Makes me wonder if the author is a convicted pediphile <.<;
I just "wish" she would grow up a little bit?
Up
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like the story, you show alot of improvement over all of the installments. Please write more.
BManDD
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is one of my favorite continuing story, I like that she's gets taller and shorter. It might be nice to see her get taller than see would like, but not too crazy. Just like you've been doing with her breasts and getting shorter.
Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment, this story is really good.
brit
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I'd love to see her getting taller... The stories are great overall. I'd also liek to see have more BE description; details about how her body feels as it changes, etc.
duffdog
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really like this story, keep up the great descriptions and interesting turns.
Daunte
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I really like where the series is heading. In this, and the previous, installment you have given the story a great deal more direction. I'd really like to see the "good doctor" play around with her a bit more in his experimentation to discover how the changes occur. I know it's not a finished story yet, but one thing that I couldn't let lie was that she had nipple rings appear due to a supposed genetic modification method. I'm guessing (hoping) that you'll clear that up later somehow...
Flyguy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Your Stories are great keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Dr Know
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Good work! I really like how Anne's trouble changes from a possible magic source to one of science. I'd like to see how extreme her changes can go, size, age etc.. Thanks for writing this series if no one else has thanked you yet!
Spork
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Excellent story, as always. Very neat new direction, making only detrimental wishes count now, good way to keep it fresh. I also liked that even the good Doctor was giving in, shows that not everyone is immune, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep it going, please!
hugh
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome. Please continue your amazing work.
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The suspense is killing me
TheSilent One
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Keep em coming, i love em!
Z
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good suspense, awesome story. Keep up the good work!
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