Loved the story. BE via implants. The only things that i found lacking were little things that i like to have included in these kinds of stories. for realism the CC value of the implants needs to be included. for readers like me its less about seeing the numbers increase and more about being able to visualize the actual size change. Its unusual to deal with breast size measured in inches especially dealing with such large sizes. I do not believe it is an accurate depiction of total volume. also i believe that the author should look into expander implants that can be filled at any time as opposed to completely replacing the implant every time a size change is warranted.
The detail concerning weight change of her breasts was great, however. I loved seeing her struggle with the progressively larger sizes. Seeing her almost immobile at the end with the knowledge that most of her breasts have air filled implants in them was just great. Almost all authors completely overlook these details and i love seeing them included.
Great story, much better then the other stuff in that contest. Great descriptions and sex scenes. Love the variety of alterations. But the characters could been better. Didn't like when it switched to present tense and back.
WOW IMPRESSIVE STORY.... YOU COULD CHARGE MONEY FOR DOING IT...
I'm also shocked that no one has commented on this story. I really, really enjoyed it and it's sad that no one really left any feedback for it. The
I'm supriesed that no-one's commented on this story before...
Very well done. It's a very WOW story, unfortunately, and not for everyone, but it reads well.
The characters are archetypes of the genre, of course, and Max is especially flat, but generally likeable, thou I'd have liked the challenges to be slightly less easily overcome.
And nice sex scenes!