Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
Orgyston
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Great story, much better then the other stuff in that contest. Great descriptions and sex scenes. Love the variety of alterations. But the characters could been better. Didn't like when it switched to present tense and back.
tljlf2000
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
WOW IMPRESSIVE STORY.... YOU COULD CHARGE MONEY FOR DOING IT...
clib
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm also shocked that no one has commented on this story. I really, really enjoyed it and it's sad that no one really left any feedback for it. The
humblefool
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm supriesed that no-one's commented on this story before...
Very well done. It's a very WOW story, unfortunately, and not for everyone, but it reads well.
The characters are archetypes of the genre, of course, and Max is especially flat, but generally likeable, thou I'd have liked the challenges to be slightly less easily overcome.
And nice sex scenes!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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