The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Geeky high school boy gets revenge on classmates by giving them what they wish for.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Quite a good story; found it enjoyable to read.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A wonderfully fun story to read, I hope to see more one day soon.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Aaah. This story was most excelent. It was fun and hot all at the same time... although it ended grrrr. I like how you don't have to cut too many corners to get to the good parts. It stays pretty interesting. I got alot of what I was looking for. Good job.

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