The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil
xxxecil@hotmail.com
AREA-69 "Code-Pink"
Average Scores:

hec
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

more!

namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

yep, XXXecil alright - excellent stories!

Duffman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

INCREDIBLE STORY...another great one from xxxecil...wish he would write more!!!

daywalkr82
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another wonderful story. I loved Talia's transformation. And the level of insatiability you produced in these characters was unbelievable

HorseRadish
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Another one from the master...

cjpos
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Excellent - just a few breaks were hard to follow. Recomend reading.

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