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The Overflowing Bra

humblefool
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The Effects of a Microgravity Environment on Artificially Induced Breast Development
Inspired by a post in the forum, I took the title and ran with it.  A woman has a change of heart (and size) while visiting the moon.
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 rtpoe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Thanks for using my idea! A good story; definitely better than I could have done with it. Can't give it 5's all the way across - people will think it's because I'm biased...
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