The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

MrHHH
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The first Annual Breast Expansion Story contest! The file attached will forward you to the offical page.

Average Scores:
 Is this a joke?
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
:/ recommended my butt, this was garbage.
 Omen
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Nicely illustrated, structure isn't bad, but needs more of a plot and there's no payoff yet.
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