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A medical assistant uses an experimental formula and has a friend record the results.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.00
Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A few spelling and punctuation errors. Who's Andrea?? (Oops!) I really enjoyed the story, especially the medical detail. I would really like to see more episodes of the story, continuing onwards.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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