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The Overflowing Bra

Baron Chimera
baron_chimera@yahoo.com
The Amulet of Krogoth
A girl, after a tearful breakup with her ex, Peter (a large-breast lover), finding herself wishing her breasts were larger. She is surprised when she then meets Sal Dogma, who seels her the Amulet of Krogoth, insisting it can alter one's body as their lover sees fit. Reluctant to use it, she tries to make ammends with Peter, and shows him the power of the amulet. At first their prayers were answered, but what happens with Peter takes the use of the amulet too far in a passionate moment?
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

get her giant boobs

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