A stranger makes Ann's worst nightmare come true. Comments appreciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.64
- BE: 4.57
- Characters: 4.86
- Technical: 4.29
Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
L I C
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Suddenly one foot tall elf girls are starting to look really hot. Great story and you also seem to have a formidable vocabulary. There were a few mistakes that could have been caught easily but other than that it was good. If you wait a day or two and then read it again, you'll find that you can see mistakes you never knew were there. But its hard I know, you probably were just itching to post it as soon as possible.
Mattariel
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
A great story so far, although as you've no doubt already noticed from others, the grammar could do with a bit of a tuneup...but trust me, it's nothing but cosmetic.
I can't wait to see more
The Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Can't wait till the next installment. For some reason I want her to find a water hose *grin*
Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I'm still liking it! Lots of twists and turns which keeps it very interesting.
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
It gets kind of repetitive in parts, but otherwise, I like the dream-like feel of it, and dreams can be kind of repetitive sometimes, so it might also not be such a bad thing. The weirder it gets, the more I like it, though.
skriaht
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
def. becoming my favorite series on this site, can't wait for the next installment(s)!
amandda
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Spork
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent work, as always. Great series you got going on here, I check back almost every day to see if another chapter is up. Keep it up!
He who shall not be named
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very good story, really draws me into it. Can't wait to read more.
lanchoman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good story, although I m not in the shrinking thing I cant wait to see it continue and becouse of english not being my first language I cant detect the grammar errors :P
Wisdom_Tooth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
When the heck is the next chapter coming out!??
skriaht
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
any hope of another volume? *pretty please*
FearLES
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent work. For me BE fiction is all about the process of the growth and not the sex. Excellent description of the growth, great character and premise. Keep them coming please.
Les
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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