The first few chapters of a story about a teenager named Alex Anderson who comes across an ancient ring of magical origin (given to the Tuatha de Danan by the Sidhe in Ireland during the time of King Solomon), which gradually brings about some unwelcome changes in him.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 3.68
- Characters: 4.68
- Technical: 4.64
ANONYMOUS
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Could have sworn this was continued further till he went to a job interview. Was this uploaded anywhere else?
PS
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Where is the rest of the story?
Crash
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really liked this story. Competently written... and the subject matter is entirely to my tastes.
Looking forward to a sequel..
Commadant
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is easily one of the better stories i've seen on this site. The pace is good. The transformation is very interesting. The pic is great. it's only problem, WE NEED MORE! seriously, ryver, finish it up for us! it's great!
Stew
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutly fantastic, I would love to see more in this vein. Its a shame nothing has been posted in 3 years.
Alexander
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
i really hope he comes out with a sequel.
WAMMO
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Where are the next chapters?
Elle R.
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Is this going anywhere, or is it dead? Been awhile!
DaEggMan
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
While I found the initial set up a little long for my tastes, am looking forward to further chapters
Well set up story, good writting etc, keep it up!
Boobie
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Would love to read more, also keep putting pictures in occasionally (espeically hot ones like the one in here;))
nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
TG stories are really not my thing, and there wasn't much breast-enlargement. That said, the characters really sucked me in. The main character in particular was really well-drawn, as well as the portrayal of his friends, their hobbies, and the hero's family. This is a story I wouldn't mind reading more of! Technical quality was excellent, good use of the picture.
Rosa
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Quite well done, looking forward to more
Duckie
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
very nice :) cant wait for the next part :)
Why Ate Urp
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not my usual cup of tea, but nicely done. Looking forward to seeing more of the same.
geoffk
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Not really a BE story--this should really be on Fictionmania. However, I enjoyed it a lot. The transformation and the character's reactions were very well done and the story is very well-written and interesting. Very much looking forward to new parts.
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
As usual, your writing is very interesting and enjoyable, even though I find TG to be more than bit overdone lately. Looking forward to more, but hoping for more BE.
LostInCleavage
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The sheer amount of development put into the transformation alone is a complement to your writing skill. I liked the fact that the transformation was hinted by so many of the character's sensations yet never explicitly defined until the end.
bloody Kitsune
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
AMAZING the best TG story i have ever read andi have read a hell of a lot being a big Rannma 1/2 fan. Your characters where amazingly detaild. In fact it might be the best non published story i have ever read!
bobafett778
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really enjoied your work hope you keep it up. I have never cared about a BE story charater before want to see what will happen. LOL
FantasyElf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love it! I am really looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work!
Lord Kahn
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, this is really promising, i can't wait for the next chapters.
Also, please keep putting pictures on your stories.
Gyumao
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good story, I can't wait for more.
Nobody
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent work. Please continue, uncompleted stories aren't meant to stay that way you know.
taggman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
very good maybe you can write a sequale from this if you don't mind!!
lol
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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