The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Insanity
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Tales of Insanity: Extra Credit
A girl's Health teacher has some interesting methods for giving make-up credit.
Average Scores:

Devyfox111
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A very good story. There were a couple things in there that weren't for my taste, but they were all handled superbly.

Nurglespuss
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Excellent work, very easy to read. But definately needs more added!

DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Well written, but a little too out there for my tastes.

G-man
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Curious, maybe attempted too much in too short a time

cmdr_mark
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really liked this story. It was short and to the point, leaves us hanging a bit but that was the point of that kind of ending. Really fun.

oxomox
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Overall I really enjoyed it. Magical Realism works well in BE/Preg. My only complaint is that I want more. More! MORE!

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