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After being transformed Gwen travels to her boyfriend's cabin in the woods. But the wizards follow her and she realizes hiding her size is not such an easy thing. Continued from Little Help
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.43
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 3.43
- Technical: 3.86
godofwar5000
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Enjoyed immensely, awaiting the next installment.
ugh
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Not bad, keep working on it!
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Has all of the stuff I like to read in a BE story, and hopefully it comes to a neat conclusion.
Kheben
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Alright, I hope you read this, cauz you need to hear it - KEEP WRITING. Although I won't say this is the best story ever, you definitely have the proper elements for a very good one. The way you described the girl growing (and her feeling it) was superb. You also mixed in everything I love in these stories - BE, Butt/Hip Growth, and Lactation. GTS I'm not as much into (especially when they get into the realm of abnormal), but it was still a good read.
I definitely look forward to any other stories you write. Hell, if you feel like discussing/bullshitting BE or whatnot, send me an email at Kheben@Aol.com
(I'm gonna post this up on both stories for the sake of giving you the rating and whatnot.)
Hybrid
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
very cool, awesome plot. if it weren't for the expicite sexual content it could be turned into an actual children's fantasy story. one thing that would be interesting to me to see in the third part (aside from a threesome with Michael, Gwen, and Kelsey) would be Bob and Tim turned into women (this could be the payback method at the end, if the ending is a happy ending). i have some ideas, but too many for this message. email at spykesurfer90@hotmail.com
bspider
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Kinda funny too please coninue
lanchoman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
One of the best stories i have read, fast reading and fun.
I personaly love the Butt/hip growth and the way you did it here.
¡¡¡Please give us the third part soon!!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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