The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Codfish
Pill Cream
Nicole, having won the Lottery ius finnaly able to achieve what she always wanted. 'Bigger boobs, bigger everything!' Her Boyfriend certainly isn't complaining.
Average Scores:

anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You really have to continue this

Matt
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I like it; Definitely a good first story...Looking forward to the continuation and more stories from this author.

IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Please tell us you'll actually continue this!

joe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

great!

mrletters
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Is she 16 or 18?

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Some grammer mistakes (as said previously by mrletters: is she 16 or 18?) and the characters could use some more development, but this is a good start IMO and the development can be eased in I suppose over successive additions to the story. I'd like to see this continue to be worked on: definitely potential here.

Clovis
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A good start but it all felt too rushed. More details and more time for the characters to experience the growth stages would help a lot I think.

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

nice!

Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Good story! Looks like the main charecters are looking forward to more growth in this story and so am I.

gottlieb
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Looking forward to the next part.

professor grow
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Looking forward to part 2.

benji dude
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Not a bad story, a few grammar mistakes and the glaring mistake of her age (is she 16 or 18). The only other thing I didn't agree with was the size of the house they brought, £35.5 million and they get a 3 bedroomed house, I know the prices of houses is ott at the moment but that's taking it a little too far.

Small dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Really great story, can't wait to see you continue it. The characters are a bit thinner than the descriptions, but it's still quite top notch!

boobmonkey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

nice! Enough character to read, but a little more would help.

micamaca
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

You have to continue this

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