cheviot@cheviotsplace.com
They're back! Just when you thought everything was back to normal in Baltimore more evil is afoot. They got lucky the first time, can the Michelle and Lisa survive again?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.00
Insanity
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I enjoyed both stories thoroughly. You don't see too many conspiratory-type plots here too often, and I thought it was great. Your descriptions of the physical changes was a bit lacking in the second story, I thought, but it wasn't too bad. I really liked the characters, especially the dialogue between the girls. And aside from the numerous typos, I thought your grammer and writing style was fine. Merci et adieu.
DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This one seemed a bit rushed and lacking detail that the previous story had. There also seemed to be a few plot holes, otherwise it was a pretty decent story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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